Rubric. Evaluation.

Rubric.

Surface features: Great. I have know mastakes but I would of if I didn't do it on the computer. The title is good and tells you what the storys about.

Deeper features: Exceptional. I have one idea in each paragraph, it makes sence and lots of sectences.

Title and intro: Great. My hook is good and makes the audience want to read on and the intro tells you what the storys about.

Organization of writing: Great. The hook captures the audiences attention so the reader reads on. The argument is strog
could be better.

Strengths of argument: Great. I go off the topic a bit but it is all true.

Publication: Exceptional. The title stands out and It has paragraphs so it separates all of the ideas. It is easy to keep track of.

Speech Evaluation

I think my speech went very well and I wasn't as nervous as I have been before when I've shared my speech so I thought that was great.
I think I varyed my voice well and put alot of expresion into it.
It was around 2.40-2.50 So thar wasn't so bad but I still think I could of gone abit little slower, because when I practiced it at home it was 2.57 so I did go a little to fast.
Anyway I thought it was a good speech and I wrote it all by my self. ( Well baseclly.) She only helped me with the infomation I put it all in to the words and made it all make sence and put it on cue cards.
I didn't want to go into the speech finals so that toke some preser off me.
At school I nearly lost my speech so that was pretty scarry and I also hand wrote it so that didn't help at all, It made me more sad and annouyed.
So I thinks my very good and you can listen to it if you want just ask me.
Anna Cotterrell, Anna Banana

Term 3 goals evaluation.

These were my goals. Personal and School.

Personal goal.
My goal is to not have tears at gym and try new things.
I will no when I have achieved this goal because I could get to nationals and will of got a whole lot more moves.
I also need to get over my fear of doing new things and just give them a go.

Evaluation: I think I half achived this goal because I had tears at the start of this term but I have stoped now and I have had no tears for about a month and I'm very proud of it.
I also got to nationals and I got some new moves and now I don't need a spot for flicks and fly aways.
I am just giving things a go to.
So really I did achive this goal but not fully nearly.

Second goal.
My goal is to get more non negotiables done and not just stick to one non negotiable the hole time.
How will I achieve this goal: I will do about half an hour on each non negotiable and start straight away. I will try not to waste time fluffing around.
I will no when I have achieved this goal because I would of got all of my non negotiables done.

Evaluation:I thinks I have achived this goal because I useally get most of my non negotables done and I'm not fluffing around so much.
I also don't just stick to one non negotable I move one after about half an hour.