Rubric.
Surface features: Great. I have know mastakes but I would of if I didn't do it on the computer. The title is good and tells you what the storys about.
Deeper features: Exceptional. I have one idea in each paragraph, it makes sence and lots of sectences.
Title and intro: Great. My hook is good and makes the audience want to read on and the intro tells you what the storys about.
Organization of writing: Great. The hook captures the audiences attention so the reader reads on. The argument is strog
could be better.
Strengths of argument: Great. I go off the topic a bit but it is all true.
Publication: Exceptional. The title stands out and It has paragraphs so it separates all of the ideas. It is easy to keep track of.
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Sunday, December 2, 2007
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